Second Cover Draft

I decided to remove the yellow bar at the bottom of the cover as I felt that it made the yellow too overpowering.and cropped the cover image too much. I also put the mast head on a slant to make it look more like a stamp. I realised that the coverlines weren't visible enough in front of the image so I decided to put a slightly transparent black behind all of the words. I stuck with the same sky line as I think that it is attractive and would make people want to read.
I like the "WIN" plug as it will pull the audience in and make them want to open the magazine. I also added some caution tape which adds to the feeling of rebellion created by the mast head font. 
I would put a few photos of posters included in the magazine over the caution tape.