I decided here that in the last draft the background was too distracting. I also made the skyline thinner and the text slighty larger. I added the "win inside" plug from the second draft and made some of the main coverline yellow to match the skyline. I think that the dark background works better although I think I will add a layer over the top of lighting flare, much like I did in my fourth draft.
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