Final Double Page Spread

Third Double Page Spread Draft

Second Double Page Spread Draft

I changed the background here to black and created a white background for the text to make it stand out. I also changed some of the text to red for the same reason.

First Double Page Spread Draft

Review Response

I have improved this contents page by moving both "features" and "news" headings and I think this has made it better. I tried adding another column for "regulars" but it was too small to read so I decided to go back to the original layout.

Review Response

In response to the feedback my teacher gave me, I will move the "News" heading to the left so it lines up with the "Features" heading. I will also make the QR code section smaller to try and fit on a regulars section.

Review

Peer Feedback

I like the way you have put a few photos of what to expect on each page, i like the contrast of colours you have used they work well together, i like the font you have used it stands out really well.
For an improvement you could maybe make the photos a little better.

Lauren Lewis

Peer Feedback

I love the colours you have used on your contents page because they really stand out and catch the eye. I also like the images you have used because they keep the page interesting instead of it being just text and one image. Overall I think your contents page is really really good. The only thing I can say is bad about it is that I'm not so keen on the font that you've used underneath the 'Features' title as I feel it's a bit too plain, but to be honest that's just a tiny thing that I personally don't like. It's really good.

Tyla-Jayde Van Der Westhuizen

Peer feedback

Strengths of your contents page include that it is really bright and eye-catching, so will grab the reader's attention, the photos link in with the genre of your magazine, it looks really professional and similar to contents pages in pre-existing magazines.

You could improve on it by maybe having more actual contents, and put something in the right hand corner to make the page look a little fuller.

Becky Marrow