Tuesday, 19 February 2013

Peer feedback

Strengths of your contents page include that it is really bright and eye-catching, so will grab the reader's attention, the photos link in with the genre of your magazine, it looks really professional and similar to contents pages in pre-existing magazines.

You could improve on it by maybe having more actual contents, and put something in the right hand corner to make the page look a little fuller.

Becky Marrow

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