Becky Marrow
From looking at your blog I can see that you've worked really hard and the work you've completed has been more detailed than anyone elses I've looked at. I think the calender on your blog is really cool, and the pictures you've uploaded such as from the Ed Sheeran concert enforce the genre of your blog too.
Your front cover is really good and follows covention, it shows you've paid a lot of attention to detail with it. I like the process you've shown throughout making your final draft, and I think that your final draft is eye-catching, the main image is really good and the cover lines would interest readers.
To improve I would maybe add more cover lines to make it look less empty.
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